http://gabematt.blogspot.com/

Gabriel's sonnet was very interesting to me and i liked it a lot. This sonnet shows how strongly Gabriel feels towards his family. The description about his family is very true. How even when your are 100% wrong they are there to tell you that you are right. i really liked Gabriel's sonnet

http://blossomedinspiration.blogspot.com/

Alberta wrote an interesting sonnet, about a dream she had where she was experiencing a lot of confusion. In stanza #3 Alberta expresses how she is using everything she has left in her, to create this tower, and when she is almost done it slowly disappears with only a memory left.

http://live-love-livia.blogspot.com/

I think that Olivia's sonnet about the rose, was a really powerful description. It describes how an object  is slowly dying, yet she holds on to it and keeps it, almost as if she is proud that it is hers, yet it is turning into an ugly flower that no longer looks the way it was before.

Narrative Poem

THE BIRD AND HIS NEST

There once was a young bird that was looking for his nest.

Where or where is my nest?

He remembered the nest was next to the river where it was cool.

Where or where is my nest?

The bird was tired of looking and not finding his warm nest.

He decided to wait by the river and see if he could somehow see it

Where or where is my nest?

As he cried out for his nest, he discovered that he could sing and carry a tune,

people stopped and watched and listened to his cries.

Where or where is my nest?

The bird started to feel happy and sad at the same time

He could make people stop and listen but he could not find his nest.

Where or where is my nest?

Finally, he looked up high in the sky and there it was his nest on the tree.

Now he will always sing to the people to remind himself of his nest!

                Where or where is my nest?

                Where or where is my nest?

What a happy song!

Abuse

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Charlotte's Web

I dont like the way wilbur cries and complaines so much on page 50. when the sheep tells him that there going to cook him for cristmas. Ok i would agree i would feel confused and disturbed. But i wouldent spend my rest short life. i would enjoy it. Do wiered things. Not cry and complaine like the OH SO SPECIAL WILBUR.